Modifications to Proposed Bylaw Amendments

Consideration should be given to modifying the language of some of the proposed changes to avoid confusion and misinterpretation. Suggested modifications in italics.
Article V: Section 2
The proposed change states that voting members are members who have flown
hang gliders “10 hours in the preceding twelve (12) months.” Preceding from what? The bylaw should describe the event from which the clock starts to run backward.
“To vote in a Club meeting, a pilot must have flown a hang glider at Fort Funston for a total of 10 hours in the twelve months preceding the meeting.”
Article V: Section 4
The proposed change states: “No more than 3 members may be on record as
having their flying requirement waived at any point in time.” The language is
awkward and vague. “On record” and “any point in time” are undefined.
Can the waiver be “off the record” or at two points in time? To clarify, simplify.
“By majority vote, the Executive Committee may waive the 10 hour
requirement for three members.”
Article V: Section 2
The proposed change states that voting members are members who have flown
hang gliders “10 hours in the preceding twelve (12) months.” Preceding from what? The bylaw should describe the event from which the clock starts to run backward.
“To vote in a Club meeting, a pilot must have flown a hang glider at Fort Funston for a total of 10 hours in the twelve months preceding the meeting.”
Article V: Section 4
The proposed change states: “No more than 3 members may be on record as
having their flying requirement waived at any point in time.” The language is
awkward and vague. “On record” and “any point in time” are undefined.
Can the waiver be “off the record” or at two points in time? To clarify, simplify.
“By majority vote, the Executive Committee may waive the 10 hour
requirement for three members.”